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Ok well I just wanted to tell you that this is a very wonderful idea! I really love the pose and the face is awesome! Oh and your shading as improved so much!

But now on to the anatomy.

What is wrong with it is the middle section. It's too short. So it's making everything off. Your arms are too long b/c of this. The middle finger should fall about the middle section of the thigh. The elbow should fall in the middle part of the body that dips in. Also the shoulders and the beginning of the legs should be parallel to one another.

Well I hoped that helped you! And if you any questions please feel free to ask me! I’ll be happy to help you! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin) - "/>